Wednesday, August 19, 2026

Wednesday

Today we are going to discuss chapter 5. Hopefully you know what is important and why. 

The illusion of the American Dream

How time effects on dreams and possibilities

The roaring twenties

American social structure and how it effects individuals and individual actions.

Has anyone considered the meaning of Jay Gatsby's name? 

 

Question 3
 

(Suggested time—40 minutes. This question counts as one-third of the total essay section score.)
 

Many works of literature feature a character who may be reluctant to make a decision, unable to make a decision, or is resistant to doing so. This indecision can have broader implications for that character or other characters. Such implications may include changes to a character’s relationships, social and/or financial stability, well-being, or any other aspects of the character’s existence. Either from your own reading or from the list below, choose a work of fiction in which a character delays or avoids making a decision. Then, in a well-written essay, analyze how the impact of this indecision contributes to an
interpretation of the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot.
 

In your response you should do the following:
• Respond to the prompt with a thesis that presents a defensible interpretation.
• Provide evidence to support your line of reasoning.
• Explain how the evidence supports your line of reasoning.
• Use appropriate grammar and punctuation in communicating your argument.

 

 

We might also read "Hills Like White Elephants" 

 

 

Tuesday, August 18, 2026

Tuesday

Today we are going to discuss in detail chapter 4

What new characters appear. What do they tell us about Gatsby? 

What about any of the motifs we have been discussing - time, car accidents. What do you make of Gatsby's backstory. 

What is the setting for this chapter. 

There are also a lot of allusions in this chapter. Why? 

 

Please send me your notes that you've been making on The Great Gatsby. You can even send me photos of the pages you've marking in your book.

AP PROMPTS: 

  • Many plays and novels use contrasting places (for example, two countries, two cities or towns, two houses, or the land and the sea) to represent opposed forces or ideas that are central to the meaning of the work.

    Choose a novel or a play that contrasts two such places. Explaining how the places differ, what each place represents, and how their contrast contributes to the meaning of the work.

  • In a novel or play, a confidant (male) or a confidante (female) is a character, often a friend or relative of the hero or heroine, whose role is to be present when the hero or heroine needs a sympathetic listener to confide in. Frequently the result is, as Henry James remarked, that the confidant or confidante can be as much “the reader’s friend as the protagonist’s.” However, the author sometimes uses this character for other purposes as well.

    Choose a confidant or confidante discuss the various ways this character functions in the work.

  • Novels and plays often include scenes of weddings, funerals, parties, and other social occasions. Such scenes may reveal the values of the characters and the society in which they live. Select a novel or play that includes such a scene and discuss the contribution the scene makes to the meaning of the work as a whole. 

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     Notes from chapter 3

    Gatsby's Party

    Nick Carraway is invited to his party, but he claims to be one of the few.  People at Gatsby's party's at "according to the rules of behavior associated with amusement parks."  A chauffeur in a "uniform of robin's egg blue" (is this important?) brings Nick the invitation.

    Gilda Gray - Follies (allusion -Ziegfield Follies).  Lots of mentions of automobiles in this chapter.

    Nick quickly runs into Jordan Baker at the party.  Jordan is with a younger man who is still in college (there is a reason for this - he is "a persistent undergraduate given to violent innuendo").  Nick and Jordan sit with a few girls who share some gossip:

    1) One rip her dress at a former party and Gatsby sent her a new one worth $265 - because "He doesn't want any trouble with anybody"

    2) Rumor #2 - Gatsby had "killed a man once."  Gatsby's name = BY GATs

    3) "He was a German spy during the war".  Rumor #3

    The three girls are all with girls named "Mr. Mumbles" (this is a joke).

    Jordan and Nick go to Gatsby's library where they meet OWL EYES (think of the name).  Owl Eyes tells them that Gatsby's library is full of real books, but the pages are uncut.

    Owl Eyes is in the library because he's "been drunk for about a week" and  he "thought it might sober" him up "to sit in the library."  Mrs. Claud Roosevelt brought him.  Allusion.

    Nick later accidentally meets Gatsby.  Gatsby recognizes him from the war and uses the phrase "Old Sport" a lot.

    Gatsby's smile "was one of those rare smiles with a quality of eternal reassurance".  The butler comes and tells Gatsby that Chicago is on the line.

    Jordan than tells Nick - Rumor #4 - that Gatsby claims to be an Oxford man.  She doesn't believe him.

    Mr. Tostoff's "Jazz History of the World" plays out in the Gardens (allusion - think Jazz Age and famous musicians).

    There are a bunch of "drunken" fights as husbands tried to get there wives to leave.  Nick then witnesses a car crash with someone so drunk that they don't even know that they crashed and the wheel of the car is no longer connected.  (1st mention of car crashes)

    Nick and Jordan after a while begin dating.  He says, "I felt a sort of tender curiosity."  At a house-party in Warwick, Nick reports, Jordan borrowed a car and left it in the rain with its top down and then lied about it (not a car wreck - but close and due to someone being careless.  This is also Jordan's 1st "lie" that the reader becomes aware of).  Nick quickly remembers what "eluded me that night at Daisy's.  At her first big golf tournament there was a row that nearly reached the newspapers --a suggestion that she had moved her ball from a bad lie in the semi-final round."  The caddy withdrew his statements and it was dropped, but there it was.  According to Nick, "Jordan instinctively avoided clever, shrewd men" (ah - so back to the undergrad).  "She was incurable dishonest...and wasn't able to endure being at a disadvantage."

    Then - Jordan drove so close to a workman that the fender flicked a button on the man's coat.  Nick tells her that she is a rotten driver and should be more careful.  Jordan responds that it takes two to make an accident (love is a car wreck metaphor).

    Nick: "Suppose you met somebody just as careless as yourself."
    Jordan: I hope I never will.  I hate careless people.  That's why I like you."

    Nick claims at the end of the chapter that he is one of few honest people that he has known.  (interesting statement.  He says it after admitting he needs to break it off with some girl back West who he has been writing letters and signing them "Love Nick".  

    Sunday, August 16, 2026

    Monday

     

    Today we need to discuss - at length - chapters 2 and 3. 

    Notice, that Fitzgerald uses quite a few symbols, allusions, and repetitions of ideas in each chapter.

    First - we should go back to the GREEN LIGHT at the end of chapter 1. It is a famous symbol What does it represent? How does it connect to larger ideas in the novel as a whole? Does it connect to other symbols?

    Then lets get into chapter 2

    Setting. Characters. Symbols. Note, another party. How does this one differ than chapter 1. 

    What is up with the two different locations in this chapter? The valley of ashes and Manhattan.

    https://ny.curbed.com/maps/mapping-the-1920s-new-york-city-of-the-great-gatsby

    Chapter 3

    Third chapter - third party. 

    Who are the people who attend this party? What do we learn about Nick? About Jordan? About Gatsby? 

    What is Jordan's strategy for meeting the world? What symbols or motifs are present in this chapter?

    Have you noticed the use of colors. 

    HOMEWORK: Chapter 4  

    Chapter 2 (NOTES)
    Settings: Valley of Ashes and New York City
    Valley of Ashes is both an allusion (to T.S. Eliot’s The Waste Land – a poem that refers back to World War I, and turns London into a city of the dead, spiritually dead) and a symbol.  The Valley of Ashes is were “dreams” die and the spiritually dead live. 
    In the Valley of Ashes another symbol resides: The eyes of Doctor T. J. Eckleburg.  A symbol to eyes of God (though God is dead). 
    In the Valley of Ashes live George and Myrtle Wilson.
    George Wilson is a sick, anemic man.  He is of the working class and he has failed in life.  He owns a poor little gas station.  He hopes – or dreams – of buying Tom’s car so that he can sell it for a profit and move west.  As one point in this chapter, Myrtle “smiled slowly and, walking through her husband as if he were a ghost, shook hands with Tom…”
    Myrtle Wilson is Tom’s “girl”.  Tom is using her for a fling.  Tom has rented Myrtle an apartment in Manhattan (New York) and in this apartment Myrtle dreams.  Her dream is to escape her working class life and become wealthy and live like the wealthy. 
    On the way to the apartment, Tom buys Myrtle a dog.  This “dog” will be an allusion (keep this in mind for the end of the novel).  Myrtle in reality is Tom’s dog.   There’s a reference about a dog collar later in the chapter.  Who is this collar for?
    At Myrtles (or Tom’s) apartment a party happens.  Myrtle invited up the Mckees and her sister Catherine.
    Mr. McKee is a photographer – a poor photographer. 
    Catherine is around thirty, slender, and “worldly” (not).  She’s a gossip. 
    Catherine gives the first rumor about Gatsby – “he’s a nephew or a cousin of Kaiser Wilhelm’s.” 
    Catherine also presents a lie about Tom and Daisy’s marriage: “Neither of them can stand the person they’re married to” (this in reference to Tom and Myrtle).  “It’s really his wife that’s keeping them apart.  She’s a Catholic and they don’t believe in divorce.”
    Myrtle, of course, challenges (after an afternoon of drinks) Tom’s marriage by yelling “Daisy Daisy Daisy” over and over.  Tom, showing her that Myrtle is beneath Daisy and that his marriage isn’t to be question, breaks her nose. 
    New York City is the place in this book where dreams run into reality. 
    Versailles (what happens there) is mentioned a few times in this chapter as is Town Tattle and Simon Called Peter

     

    Thursday, August 13, 2026

    Friday - The Great Gatsby

     

    Please be prepared to discuss chapter 1 of The Great Gatsby

    Some things to consider: themes. What themes are presented in the first chapter? 

    Characters - what do we know about the following characters?

    Nick Caraway

    Daisy Buchanan

    Tom Buchanan

    Jordan Baker

    Jay Gatsby

    Are there any quotes that stand out as important? Why? What do you think they mean or how do they establish meaning or connection to a major idea.

    Are there any symbols, allusions, irony?

    What is the setting (s)? Why are these important?

    What is the point of view?

    What is the dramatic situation. What are the conflicts so far.


    HW: For Monday read chapters 2-3. 




    Saturday, August 1, 2026

    Background information on The Great Gatsby

     You should watch this quick overview, at 1.5 speed, on The Great Gatsby. 

     

      

    This is just for fun.  


    AP Literature

     

    Welcome to AP Lit 


     

    "With a phone and a typewriter, you can change the world" - the literary renaissance motto

    Question 3
     

    (Suggested time—40 minutes. This question counts as one-third of the total essay section score.)

    2026 Many works of literature depict a conflict between the old and the new: Old worlds, old ways, or old values clash with newer ones. Either from your own reading or from the following list, choose a work of fiction in which there is marked tension between the old and the new. Then, in a well-written essay, analyze how the tension between the old and the new contributes to an interpretation of the work as a whole. 

    In your response you should do the following:
    • Respond to the prompt with a thesis that presents a defensible interpretation.
    • Provide evidence to support your line of reasoning.
    • Explain how the evidence supports your line of reasoning.
    • Use appropriate grammar and punctuation in communicating your argument. 

    AP RUBRICS 

    AP Question 3 from the beginning of Time  




    AP Literature and Composition
    Course Syllabus: 2026-2027
    Instructor: Kent Fielding


    COURSE DESCRIPTION:

    The overall goal of the AP Literature and Composition class is to engage students in careful reading and critical analysis of imaginative literature and to prepare the students to take the AP Test in May.  As this is a college level course, students are expected to work more independently than in a typical high school course and to participate in classroom discussion.  Be warned that the class is very small and therefore it will be noticed by both the teacher and the other students if you haven’t done your reading and writing homework (and if this is the case I may ask you to stop by after school for a talk).  You, the student, are responsible for your own learning.  In college, no-one will ask—they will expect.

    FOCUS (restated): A.P. is designed to be a challenging, engaging exploration of literature as ART.  Through critical reading, discussion, and written analysis of novels, plays, and poetry from various periods and perspectives, students will develop the reading, thinking and composition skills necessary for success in a college literature class.  Students carry considerable intellectual responsibility for course preparation.  This is a joint venture between teacher and students not a “teacher-driven” monologue.  Therefore there will be times when students will direct the class and lead, and times when students will actually teach the class activities.

    Student progress will be evaluated in many ways including essays (both in class and out of class), short answer tests, homework assignments, timed-impromptu writing, dialectical journals, and quizzes.

    SOME GOALS:

    To analyze literature by explaining how writers use the techniques of their art (craft) such as structure, style, theme, figurative language to communicate ideas
    To look at the social and historical values displayed in the literature we read
    To develop effective written and oral arguments by looking at logical organization, use of details, generalizations, sentence structure and vocabulary
    To develop effective research skills
    To think about how people live ethical and moral lives and how this is reflected in literature
    To explore and apply different theories of literary criticism.  Some theories we will investigate include: Historical, Moral-Philosophical, Mimetic, Formalist, Psychological, Symbolical or Mythological, Feminist, Reader-Response, Structuralism and Deconstruction, and New Criticism.


    TEXTS:
    We might be reading from any of the following texts, in part and whole:

    Arp, Thomas R. and Greg Johnson, Editors.  Perrine’s Literature, Structure, Sound,

    and Sense, 8th Edition.  Boston: Heinle & Heinle, 2002.

    Hamlet or King Lear, Shakespeare
    Anna Karenina, Tolstoy
    The Aeneid, Virgil
    Beloved, Morrison
    Bleak House, Dickens
    Their Eyes Where Watching God, Hurston
    The Sun Also Rises, Hemingway
    The Inferno, Dante
    Moby-Dick, Melville
    Middlemarch, Eliot
    Selections from Paradise Lost
    Selected poetry from various periods
    Selected short stories by writers such as Joyce, Orwell, Hawthorne, Baldwin, Fitzgerald, Twain, Faulkner, including: “The Dead”,  “Sonny’s Blues”, “Babylon Revisited”, “The Hanging”, "Big Two Hearted River"
    The English Patient, Ondaatje
    Jane Eyre, Bronte

    No No Boy by John Okara 
    Pride or Prejudice by Jane Austin 

    The Vegetarian by Han Kang 


    Writing: 4-6 In-Class essays (40 minutes) per semester to give practice to the constraint of the AP test. Other writing assignments will focus on critical analysis and writing in different literary theories, including an analytical-expository essay explaining how textual details (theme, tone, symbolism, structure) create meaning and an argumentative essay relating textual evidence to social or cultural values.  Students are expected to participate in peer response (both in small groups and as a class), rewriting and 1-on-1 teacher-student conferences.  Teacher conferences will be prearranged and students are expected to have one per unit.  Conferences will focus on structure, organization, use of details to back up arguments, and sentence structure.

    You will keep a daily log reading.  This log will act as dialectical journal (see handout on dialectical journals) and your writing should include notes, quotations and comments on the text – things that you see such as stylistic devices, motifs, symbols, character quirks and insights– as well as questions the text brings up.  This blog will be visible to other students, as a reference, but no two blogs should be alike.  Beware – this blog is part of daily grade.


    Discussion: According to the College Board (the people who oversee AP courses), “Reading should be accompanied by thoughtful discussion…in the company of one’s fellow students.”  Discussions are activities intended to aid the understanding of a work.  Students must interact intellectually with their peers.  Translation: You must come to class prepared to talk about what you read.  This means take notes at home.
     
    Vocabulary and Literary Terms: Over the year, students are expected to learn literary terms, look up and post a definition with an example from their current reading.

    Resources: Students will be creating and compiling a list of on-line resources on texts and criticism that will help other students and future AP classes.  This will be a part of a final grade.

    SEMESTER I

    We will start with a reading of The Great Gatsby as an intro and then move onto poetry.


    Poetry, Exploration of Themes, and Literary Theories

    Unit 1: Introduction to Poetry (4 weeks)

    All pages refer to Perrine’s Literature: Structure, Sound, and Sense

    Week 1: Literary Terms Specific to Poetry
    Imagery: Pages 771-774, “After Apple-Picking” – Questions & Journal
    Symbol/Allegory: 807-817, “The Road Not Taken” – Questions, Journal
    Paradox, Irony, Satire: 829-839, “My Last Duchess” – Journal
    Tone: 880-885, “The Man He Killed” – Questions and Journal
    Alliteration, Assonance, Consonance: 899-907, various poems

    Week 2: Forms of Poetry

    Sonnet, Stanza, Ballad, Haiku, Villanelle, Pantoum, Blues, Blank Verse, Quatrain, Couplet, Ode, Blank Verse, Dramatic Monologue, Prose Poem, Epic Poem

    In Journals – students will need to explain how each form works and how form = idea



    Week 3:  Great Poets (focus on Modernism)
    Theme: The Individual’s Place in Society

    Frost – “Death of the Hired-Man”, “Home Burial”
    Eliot – “Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock”, “Wastelands”
    Brooke- “The Dead”
    Wilfred Owen – “Dulce et Decorum Est”
    Hughes – “Theme for English B”
    Bishop – “The Fish”
    Jarrell – “Death of Ball-Turret Gunner”
    Forche – “The Colonel”
    Clifton – “Good Times”
    Plath – “Mad Girl’s Love Song”

    And perhaps Berryman and Dylan Thomas.

    Week 4: In-Class essay, student’s poetry, poetry projects

    Students will practice their hand at writing their own poems and exploring literary devices and poetic form.  These will be read out loud.

    Students will also choose one poem from “Poems for Further Reading” and teach what the poem means and how it creates meaning by discussing form, literary devices and perhaps social context

    1st In-class essay.
    Personal or Exploratory Essay 2-3 pages.


    Unit 2: “The Search for Identity” –Prose: Creative Non-fiction, Short Story, Novel.  – Six Weeks



    The English Patient - Michael Ondaatje
    Beloved - Toni Morrison
    The Sun Also Rises – Hemingway
    “Big Two-Hearted River” – Hemingway, “Babylon Revisited” – Fitzgerald, “The Yellow Wallpaper” – Perkins, “The Only Traffic Signal on the Reservation Doesn’t Flash Red Anymore” – Alexie

    During this unit we will review the structure of the novel particularly looking at plot, character, theme, tone, symbolism, motif, imagery, allusion, types of irony.  These books and stories are classics of American Literature and we will reflect upon the experience of the narrator or protagonist (vs. what the author wants the reader to take away) and discuss how the experience exemplifies an idea of American Culture.  We will also compare and contrast the experiences presented in these stories.

    Assignments:

    Blogs/Journals – daily entries
    In-Class Essays – 1 per book or novel
    Literary Analysis Novel Project - see below



    Unit 3: Literary Theory (one of the following) Moby-Dick, Anna Karenina, Tom Jones, Bleak House or Middlemarch, Pride or Prejudice, Jane Eyre (7 weeks plus Christmas Break)

    We will look at different theories of literary criticism and how they might apply, or can be applied, to the novel.  Different theories have been listed above under “Some Goals”.

    Assignments:

    Journals – Daily exploring lit devices, characters and different crit theories.

    In-Class Essays – 2.
    Every two weeks students will choose a theory and write a 2-3-page essay trying to utilize the guiding principal of the theory to explore the meaning of novel.  The student will meet 1-1 with the instructor and the best of the three essays will be revised and expanded (5-10 pages) for a final grade.


    SEMESTER II

    Drama, Classical Literature, the social and historical world of Dickens or Austen or Tolstoy, the AP Test

    Unit 4: Classical Literature and the Tragic Hero (7 weeks)
     

    One of the following:

    The Inferno (Dante)
    The Aeneid (Vergil) and Paradise Lost (Milton).

    During this unit we will explore the meaning of the tragic hero in both drama, prose and poetry.  We will look at the origins of tragedy and why tragedy was such an important art form.

    Assignments:

    Journal: Daily entries
    In-class essays: 3

    Unit 5: No-No Boy or The Vegetarian or ?



    Assignments:

    Blog/Journal – Daily
    In-Class Essays – 3
    Argumentative Essay – students will write an essay exploring the textual details of  No No Boy and make an argument about what the author was trying to say about the social life and culture of the time.

    Unit 6: Poetry and Literary Movements


    Unit 7: AP Test

    We will spend 2-3 weeks reviewing strategies for the test – both the essay and multiple-choice selections.

    AP TEST:




    Final Notes:

    Plagiarism: Please do not copy or directly quote without giving proper citation (or acknowledgement) someone else writing.  This is intellectual theft and writers and critics take this seriously.  This also means do not copy from each other.  This classroom cannot be a “group mind” but must be a group of individual minds working to support each other’s ideas.  A plagiarized assignment will receive a zero with no chance for make-up. Repeated offenses will result in conferences with parents and administration and a probable “F” in the course.  It is okay to check sites like sparknotes.com but don’t let these sites do your thinking.  For one thing, the sites are too general, for success in AP you need to analysis beyond sparknotes and further I sometimes check these sites before I read your assignments.  I expect assignments to be free of these sites just as I don’t expect to see anyone referencing wikipedia in an argumentative essay.


    GRADES:

    Test: 20% of total grade
    Essays: 50% of total grade
    Homework, class work 10% of total grade
    Journals   20% of total grade

    Scale:

    100- 93 = A
    92.49- 90 = A-
    89.49- 87 = B+
    86.49-83.00 = B
    82.49- 80.00 = B-
    79.49-77.00 = C+
    76.49- 73 = C
    72.49-70.00 = C-
    69.49-67.00 = D+
    66.49- 63.00 = D
    62.49- 60 = D-
    Below 60 = F

    LATE WORK: This is a college course therefore no late work will be accepted without talking with the instructor beforehand.


    RULES

    --Be in your seat when the bell rings
    --Remain on task for the entire period (we need to cover a lot of ground in one short year)
    --Read what you are suppose to read on time
    --Meet the spirit of the assignment and course not just the letter grade
    --Ask lots of questions about our readings and writings
    --Turn in all work on time
    --Remember everything you write in class is public and may be shared with the class at anytime (this means be prepared to read your own work out loud—no excuses)
    --Think creatively, critically, and analytically
    --Come to class passionate about literature
    --Remember basic school rules: respect others at all times, no ipods in this class, get out computers only when needed (being on email or chats during class is not only not allowed but is disrespectful and will earn you detention with Mr. Fielding and an extra timed-essay to write during this detention.
    --SMILE—this is a fun class



    Literary Devices  
    AP English

    Every discipline employs a special vocabulary; literary criticism is no exception. Literary criticism is based in part on the assumption that writing is a purposeful activity and that excellent literature – work of literary merit --  is not merely a happy accident. During the year I will be encouraging you to familiarize yourself with some of the terminology that is used in literary criticism. To that end, you will be creating a glossary of literary devices that you encounter in your reading. Below I have included a list of a few of the many devices you will encounter while reading; you are in no way constrained to this list, it’s just there for your information – to give you a small sampling of the wonderful world of literary devices. There are hundreds of devices that writers employ; you will no doubt find a few that I have not heard of before.


    allegory
    alliteration
    allusion
    ambiguity
    antagonist
    analogy
    apostrophe
    archetype
    aside
    assonance
    aubade
    ballad
    blank verse
    cacophony
    caesura
    catharsis
    character / flat, round
    complication
    conceit
    connotation
    colloquial diction
    comedy
    connotation
    controlling metaphors
    cosmic irony
    denotation
    dramatic irony
    dramatic monologue
    echo
    elegy
    epigram
    existential character
    extended metaphor
    farce
    flashback
    formal diction
    free verse
    heroic couplet
    hyperbole
    imagery
    informal diction
    initiation story
    metaphor
    motif
    myth
    narrative structure
    onomatopoeia
    overstatement
    oxymoron
    parable
    paradox
    parody
    pastoral
    personification
    point of view
    protagonist
    psychological realism
    realism
    rhythm
    rite of passage
    sarcasm
    satire
    simile
    soliloquy
    sonnet
    style
    symbol
    syntax
    theme
    tone
    tragedy
    verbal irony


    Over the course of the semester you’ll be asked to complete a number of literary device entries. Generally speaking, you’ll be able to select the device that you wish to use; on rare occasions I’ll tell you which device you need to discuss. Your examples may come from books we read in class, novels you read for your outside reading, or novels of literary merit that you have read on your own. Texts from your other English classes are not acceptable.



    POETRY TEST:
    Elements: Know both definitions and examples
    Imagery, denotation, connotation, irony – verbal, situational, dramatic, sarcasm, metaphor, personification, metonymy, apostrophe, synecdoche, symbol, allegory, paradox, overstatement, understatement, allusion, tone, alliteration, assonance, consonance, internal rime, slant rime, end rime, approximate rime, refrain, meter, iamb, trochee, anapest, dactyl, spondee, monosyllabic foot, line, stanza, cacophony, caesura, enjambment, onomatopoeia

    Forms:
    Structure, line breaks, how the poem looks, rhyme and rhythm and how it is created
    Blues, Sestina, Villanelle, Pantoum, Sonnet (English, Italian, Spenserian, and hybrid), haiku, quatrain, tercets, couplets, litany, ballad.

    Poems:
    “Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” “Home Burial” “Heights of Machu Picchu” “The Flea” “My Last Duchess” “The Wastelands” “To His Coy Mistress”, “The Waste Lands” “Nani” “The Colonel” “One Art” “Fern Hill” “The Waking” “My Mistress’ Eyes” “The Second Coming”



    The Dialectical Journal

    Effective students have a habit of taking notes as they read. This note-taking can several forms: annotation, post it notes, character lists, idea clusters, and many others. One of the most effective strategies is called a dialectical journal. The word “dialectical” has numerous meanings, but the one most pertinent is the “art of critical examination into the truth of an opinion.” As you read, you are forming an opinion about what you are reading (or at least you are SUPPOSED to be forming an opinion). That opinion, however, needs to be based on the text – not just a feeling. This is not Touchy-Feeling English, it is AP English. Therefore, all of your opinions need to begin with a text. To that end, you will need to create a dialectical journal as you read your outside reading novel. You will then use this journal to help you write your outside reading paper, and I will use it to gauge just how interactive you are with your novel. This journal will be included as a significant part of your paper – in fact, you will be unable to get anything higher than a low “B” without completing the journal, so take it seriously.

    The procedure is as follows:

    1. As you read, pay close attention to the text.

    2. Whenever you encounter something of interest (this could be anything from an interesting turn of phrase to a character note), write down the word/phrase making sure that you NOTE THE PAGE NUMBER. If the phrase is especially long just write the first few words, use an ellipsis, then write the last few words.

    3. Then WRITE YOUR OBSEVRATIONS ABOUT THE TEXT you noted or quoted.  Please separate this two things by a little space. You need to interact in detail with the text. Make sure that your observations are THOROUGH, INSIGHTFUL, and FOCUSED CLEARLY ON THE TEXT.


    That is all there is to it. This way, once you have read your text you will already have a great set of notes on which to draw when you write your paper. You also should have gained a great deal of insight about your particular text.

    Note: After you do your nightly blog entry you’ll need to list or pose a set of questions – five –ten that you’d like to discuss in class.

    On some nights I will have you focused on a particularly idea, scene, or literary element.

    Beloved  or The English Patient - ASSIGNMENT
    (This assignment should equal about 20 pages)

    This particular writing project requires you to read and write an in depth style analysis of a challenging work of literary merit. Due to the independent nature of the project, you will need to be vigilant in completing all of the tasks required because I will not be reminding you every week to work on this. There are two parts to this assignment. First, there is a dialectical journal you must keep while reading your novel (the guidelines for that journal will be provided separately) . Second, you must complete all of the sections detailed in this document.

    For this project, you need to write about each of the areas below. For the sake of clarity and organization, please make sure that each of your sections has the proper heading, and that the sections are dealt with in the order in which they are listed on this assignment sheet. Due to the nature of this research paper you do not need to provide transitions between the different sections, you merely need to provide the heading. This assignment must be typed, with a standard 12 point Times New Roman font, and 1.5 spaced. The cover sheet should contain your name, class period, and date submitted. All of the standards for proper conventions are expected. A paper that has a distracting number of errors will only be eligible to receive a “C” or lower.

    Each section has a series of questions that are meant to stimulate your thinking and writing. They are not intended to be answered in order, but instead are intended merely to act as a guide for your analysis.

    One last important note: FOR EACH SECTION, make sure that you connect your commentary both to DIRECT TEXT EXAMPLES (always cited with the correct page number!) as well as to the NOVEL AS A WHOLE. Only papers that accomplish this will receive an “A” grade.

    1. THE AUTHOR AND HER/HIS TIMES: Biographical and historical information pertinent to the novel. What important family, community, national, and world events helped inform this material? Do not provide an exhaustive biography; merely provide those details that can be directly linked to the novel in a manner that is convincing. This is one of the few sections that will require some outside research, so please remember to cite your source(s).

    2. FORM/STRUCTURE, PLOT: How is the novel organized and what techniques are used? Discuss techniques such as sequencing, multiple, complex, or simple plot, foreshadowing, chapter choices. Then, provide a BRIEF outline of the events of the plot (no more than 200 words). For some modern novels, the plot may be difficult to describe succinctly – but try to do it anyway. When you discuss structure, remember that you need to discuss the effect of the intentional internal arrangement of parts.

    3. POINT OF VIEW/ PERSPECTIVE: From what vantage point does the reader receive the information? Is the perspective reliable, or is it highly subjective? How are important ideas received? Is there an agenda that the narrator seems to have, either consciously or subconsciously? Does the perspective shift, and if so, to what end? Are characters explicit in their dialog, or does on omniscient narrator fill the reader in concerning the larger issues? Why is the perspective used particularly effective for this novel?

    4. CHARACTER: Are each of the characters highly developed, or is most of the writing devoted to one character? Do you learn about them through what is not included in the text? How is character revealed for the most part? Is through what they say? What they do? What they wear? What they think? The people with whom they associate? What the narrator says about them? How complex are the people that you meet? Describe the central characters including what you find out about their names, ages, physical descriptions, personalities, functions in the novel – in other words, the responses to the questions asked in the preceding sentence. Also include one short quotation that reveals their character, and explain why the quote reveals character.


    5. SETTING: Where and when does the novel occur? How many locations are described? Are there connections between the setting(s) and character(s)? How is the atmosphere described? Are there any important settings that contrast or parallel each other? Why is this setting so effective in supporting the ideas in the novel as a whole? Conversely, if the setting is ambiguous, what details seem most important and what is the effect of the ambiguity? Why is this story best told in this setting? When discussing setting, remember that it does not only mean the geographical location (topography, scenery) but also the cultural backdrop, social context, and the artificial environment (rooms, buildings, cities, towns) as well.

    6. THEME: Identify one major theme (a central or controlling idea) and explicate the theme using specific moments from the text, either paraphrased or directly quoted. What is the abstract concept being addressed and what is the evaluation of that concept through the text? Are there any “universal” truths are revealed, supported, or challenged by this theme? Be aware that a theme cannot be expressed in a single word, and with complex works of literary merit the elucidation of a theme requires a full paragraph or more. Also note that the theme is rarely stated explicitly, but rather is implicit. Remember that a theme has TWO (2) PARTS: An abstract concept AND the author’s commentary on or evaluation of that concept through the text.

    7. CRITICAL REVIEW: Find one critical review (not a Cliffs Notes or similar source) of you novel and offer your opinion of the critic’s analysis in two or three paragraphs. Attach a copy of the critical review to your paper, and cite it directly. When expressing your response to the review, be specific in your discussion. If you agree, then explain why and carry the argument beyond what the critic pointed out. If you disagree, provide support for your position from the text.

    8. DICTION: Analyze the novelist’s word choice. Is the language high or formal, neutral, informal? Does the novelist employ slang(faddish words)? Colloquialisms (nonstandard regional ways of using language(like someone from Boston asking where you “paah-ked yeh caaah”)? Jargon (language associated with a particular trade)? Dialect (think Tom Sawyer)? Is the language plain? Flowery? Concise? Vulgar? Dense? Elevated? Select a passage that illustrates your observations and discuss this passage directly.

    10. TONE: What is the author’s attitude towards the subject of the novel? Discuss how the author creates the tone you identified through a variety of vehicles including plot, characterization, setting, and anything else that contributes to tone. Use specific text examples to support your findings.

    11. TITLE: Why is this title so appropriate for the novel? Does it have literal or symbolic significance? Does it actually appear in the novel, and if so, what is the situation? Is the title an allusion, and if so, why would the title include this allusion? Does the title implicitly connect to the theme of the work?

    12. MEMORABLE QUOTE: Choose and type out one quotation that you believe to be significant or noteworthy. Please explain your choice. Is it an especially moving moment? Is it especially well-written? Why does this quote stand out for you?

    13. PERSONAL RESPONSE: What did you enjoy about the novel and why? What did you not enjoy about the novel and why? Are you eager to read another novel by this author? Would you recommend this novel to a friend? Make a case for either adding the novel to the AP curriculum, or give reasons why it should not be a part of this course.

    SAMPLE TEST:

    AP Open Question – SUN ALSO RISES Test
    Today we are going to look at the open question for AP literature.

    You will get one of these questions as a test for THE SUN ALSO RISES.

    In some works of literature, a character who appears briefly, or does not appear at all, is a significant presence. Choose a novel or play of literary merit and write an essay in which you show how such a character functions in the work. You may wish to discuss how the character affects action, theme, or the development of other characters. Avoid plot summary.

    Select a moment or scene in a novel, epic poem, or play that you find especially memorable. Write an essay in which you identify the line or the passage, explain its relationship to the work in which it is found, and analyze the reasons for its effectiveness.

    Choose a complex and important character in a novel or a play of recognized literary merit who might on the basis of the character's actions alone be considered evil or immoral. In a well-organized essay, explain both how and why the full presentation of the character in the work makes us react more sympathetically than we otherwise might. Avoid plot summary.

    An effective literary work does not merely stop or cease; it concludes. In the view of some critics, a work that does not provide the pleasure of significant closure has terminated with an artistic fault. A satisfactory ending is not, however, always conclusive in every sense; significant closure may require the reader to abide with or adjust to ambiguity and uncertainty. In an essay, discuss the ending of a novel or play of acknowledged literary merit. Explain precisely how and why the ending appropriately or inappropriately concludes the work. Do not merely summarize the plot.

    Morally ambiguous characters -- characters whose behavior discourages readers from identifying them as purely evil or purely good -- are at the heart of many works of literature. Choose a novel or play in which a morally ambiguous character plays a pivotal role. Then write an essay in which you explain how the character can be viewed as morally ambiguous and why his or her moral ambiguity is significant to the work as a whole. Avoid mere plot summary.

    Novels and plays often include scenes of weddings, funerals, parties, and other social occasions. Such scenes may reveal the values of the characters and the society in which they live. Select a novel or play that includes such a scene and, in a focused essay, discuss the contribution the scene makes to the meaning of the work as a whole. You may choose a work from the list below or another novel or play of literary merit.

    Examples of Homework:

    Read chapters 12 -13

    Pick out two things in each chapter that you find significant to the overall meaning of the novel. List and comment on them.

    You should think about the open response questions before you begin reading.


    Outside Reading Assignment:
    Due: Tuesday – December 17th
    Objective: To present a 5-10 speech in which you illuminate some aspect of an outside novel.  You may choose to illuminate the audience on the relationship of characters to the times and or society or discuss the function of a character or characters to overall meaning.  You can look at novel structure and how the structure reinforces the main idea.  You can discuss literary devices (symbols, irony, allusions, etc), diction, syntax, or vocabulary and how their reinforce meaning.
    Avoid mere plot summary.
    Your speech will be giving without notes and should include the following:
    Organization (25 points)
    1) Hook
    2) Thesis statement
    3) Order of development
    4) Body
    5) Conclusion
    Analysis (25 points)
    You explore your thesis by giving examples from the novel and commenting on what those examples mean and how they backup and reinforce your thesis.
    You should have at least 2 points (though try for 3) and you should have 2-3 examples for each point.
    Your conclusion should be more than just a recap of your 1st paragraph.  It should leave the audience thinking and suggest other areas to explore.



    In-class essays will be graded using the AP essay scale.

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